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                Minutes (2), Enclosures (transcribed) (11), Enclosures (untranscribed) (11).</p>

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New Westminster, British Columbia,
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New Westminster British Columbia,
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New Westminster British Columbia
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New Westminster British Columbia
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Lands and Works Department
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New Westminster, British Columbia
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New Westminster British Columbia
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<head>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to <persName ref="prs:newcastle">Newcastle</persName>
</head>
<opener><ref type="co_ref">10840, CO 60/17, p. 463; received 11 November
</ref>
<address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>
</addrLine>
<addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-16">September 16<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To His Grace
The <persName ref="prs:newcastle">Duke of Newcastle</persName> K.G.
Secretary of State, for the Colonies
&amp;c &amp;c &amp;c</name>
<lb/><lb/>
May it please your Grace,
</opener>
<p>
We have the honor to state, that as judges appointed by
His<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">Excellency</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00460v.jpg"/> Excellency the Governor, in <date when="1862">1862</date>, to adjudicate upon the
merits of Essays setting forth the capabilities, resources,
and advantages, of <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>, as a Colony for settlement,
in pursuance of our duties, we awarded the premium of Fifty
pounds (£50) for the "Essay" of the "<persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown</persName>, M.A.," and returned the Essay, in the same state in which it came into
our hands, unchanged in any way, to the Chief Commissioner of
Lands and Works, for His Excellency.
</p>
<p>
An Essay has just been issued in pamphlet form, from<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">the</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00461r.jpg"/> the
printing establishment of the Government, purporting to be the
same, (see official notice on the back of the title page) viz.
"An Essay by the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown, M.A.</persName>"
</p>
<p>
It is our duty—respectfully—to call Your Grace's attention
to this pamphlet, as being very different from the Essay in
question, when adjudicated upon, and is a document made up by
leaving out numerous important matters, that were in the
original, by manipulations, and by introducing new matter,
different and diametrically opposite to statements made in the
original,<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">which</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00461v.jpg"/> which, if not counteracted, would mislead parties
in England and elsewhere, and we are particularly desirous that
the truth be conveyed to Your Grace.
</p>
<p>
The Appendices (N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">os</hi> 1 to 9) herewith will place this matter
more clearly before Your Grace, and we beg Your Grace's notice
especially to N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">os</hi> 5 and 8.
</p>
<p>
We take the liberty of introducing here—an extract from
the British Columbian newspaper of the <date when="1863-09-12">12<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> instant</date>,
indicating the nature of some of the changes which have been
made in the original Essay (newspaper clipping follows here).
</p><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00462r.jpg"/>
<closer>
We have the honor to be Your Grace's
<lb/>
most obedient and most humble Servants
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">Henry Holbrook</persName>
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:cormack">W.E. Cormack</persName>
<lb/>
Members of the "Board of Judges on Prize Essays"
<lb/>
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<ab>
<persName ref="prs:elliot_tf">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> Elliot</persName><lb/>
This letter encloses copies of a correspondence between
the Members of the "Board of Judges on Prize Essays," and
<persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Colonel Moody</persName>, on the subject of an Essay on <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">B. Columbia</placeName> by
the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Revd R.C.L. Brown</persName>. The allegation of the Board is
that the printed Essay, issued from the Royal Engineer Press,
differs materially from the original<pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00463r.jpg"/> Manuscript on which
they adjudged the Prize to the Author. <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Colonel Moody</persName>,
authorized by the Colonial Secretary, refuses to give up
the Manuscript to the Judges, but on which grounds does not
appear. I annex a copy of the Essay as printed sent home
by the <choice><abbr>Gov<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi></abbr><expan>Governor</expan></choice> in a recent despatch which is now in circulation.
This letter ought, according to rule, to have been sent thro'
the <choice><abbr>Gov<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi></abbr><expan>Governor</expan></choice> and I presume the Papers should now be referred to
him for report &amp; the Writers informed that this course has been taken?
</ab>
<closer><signed><persName ref="prs:jadis_v">VJ</persName>
<date when="1863-11-13">
13 Nov
</date>
</signed>
<signed><persName ref="prs:elliot_tf">TFE</persName> <date when="1863-11-13">13/11</date>
</signed>
<signed><persName ref="prs:newcastle">N</persName> <date when="1863-11-14">14</date>
</signed>
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<ab>
See <choice><abbr>Gov<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi></abbr><expan>Governor</expan></choice>/11527.
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</ab>
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<ab>
Newspaper clipping,
<hi style="text-decoration: underline;">British Columbian</hi>, no date, showing examples of how the essay
was altered.
</ab>
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<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00464r.jpg"/>
<ab>
Schedule of appendices enclosed with letter, nine entries.
</ab>
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<ab>
No. 1 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to Chief Commissioner
of Lands and Works, <date when="1863-09-04">4 September 1863</date>, protesting the publication of
the pamphlet as containing an essay at variance with the one
submitted and judged by the board of judges.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00467r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 2 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Archdeacon Wright</persName>, <date when="1863-09-05">5 September 1863</date>,
advising of the alteration to the substance of the winning essay and
asking for an opinion.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00469r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 3 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName>, <date when="1863-09-07">7 September 1863</date>, regretting
that the essay had been changed as noted by the other two members of
the board of judges.
</ab>
</div>
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<ab>
No. 4 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to Chief Commissioner of Lands and
Works, <date when="1863-09-07">7 September 1863</date>, asking for a copy of the original essay in order
to accurately ascertain the "nature and extent" of the changes.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00472r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 5 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName>, Colonial Secretary, <date when="1863-09-08">8 September
1863</date>, declining to participate in the formal request of
the other two judges for a copy of the original essay, understanding
that <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Brown</persName> had destroyed much of the original in the process of
condensation, but agreeing with the impropriety of the changes made
to the manuscript.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00474r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 6 Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and
<persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName>, <date when="1863-09-09">9 September 1863</date>, advising that as the government merely acted
as printers, they were not empowered to forward a copy of the manuscript
as requested.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00475r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 7 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName>, <date when="1863-09-12">12 September 1863</date>, advising
that he had protested the alterations and was informed by the government
that the function of the board ceased once their decision was made and,
while objecting to this view as open to abuse, he declined to act
further on the matter.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00477r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 8 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">Young</persName>, <date when="1863-09-11">11 September 1863</date>, agreeing that the board
were not censors, but protesting the alteration of the essay after
judging, particularly the insertion of a paragraph attacking those
who called for certain administrative changes in the colony.
</ab>
</div>
<div type="enclosure_entry"><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00479r.jpg"/>
<ab>
No. 9 Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and
<persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName>, <date when="1863-09-14">14 September 1863</date>, advising that he had been instructed by the
Colonial Secretary not to forward copy of the original essay.
</ab>
</div>
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<head>Extract from British Columbian Newspaper</head>
<opener><lb/><lb/>
are stricken out because containing strictures upon the
Government, or merited praise of the Royal Engineers, and,
in the instance which we now adduce, passages containing
sentiments the very opposite have been substituted. We
give the following as a specimen:
<lb/><lb/>
PASSAGE FROM THE PRINTED ESSAY
</opener>
<p><milestone unit="section" rend=".ind on"/>
The manner to which the Government is carried on and
the laws administered, gives general satisfaction. So long
as the Colony progresses, and its new necessities are met by
new enactments, the colonists (with the exception of an
uninfluential clique at <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>) are satisfied;
they have not the wish, as in the present circumstances they
would not have the time, to legislate for themselves.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".ind off"/>
<lb/><lb/>
PASSAGE AS CONTAINED IN THE ORIGINAL MANUSCRIPT
</p>
<p><milestone unit="section" rend=".ind on"/>
The backward state of the country, the bad condition
of the roads that exist, the waste of the revenue in the
construction of roads now abandoned—because in districts
now frequented—and undeveloped state of the agricultural
resources, are owing to the misadministration of the Government.
<lb/><lb/>
<milestone unit="section" rend=".ind off"/>
</p>
<p>
We are indebted to the two gentlemen who were appointed
judges for the above, which is the substance of the original
passage.
<lb/><lb/>
</p>
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<head>Schedule of Appendices</head>
<opener><lb/><lb/>
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N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 1 Board of Judges on Prize Essay to the Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-04">September 4<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 2 Letter from two members of the Prize Essay Board, to the
Venb<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">l</hi> Archdeacon the third member of the Board.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-05">September 5<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 3 Letter from the Venb<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">l</hi> the Archdeacon of <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British
Columbia</placeName>, to the other two members of the Prize Essay Board.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-07">September 7<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">Prize</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00464v.jpg"/>
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 4 Prize Essay Board to the Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works, requesting a reperusal of the Original manuscript.
(see reply No. 9)
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-07">September 7<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 5 Letter from the Venb<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">l</hi> <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Archdeacon Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName>
Esq<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">e</hi> Acting Colonial Secretary.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-08">September 8<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 6 Letter from the Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works
to the members of the Prize Essay Board.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-09">September 9<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">Letter</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00465r.jpg"/>
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 7 Letter from the Venb<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">l</hi> <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Archdeacon Wright</persName> to the other
two members of the Board.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-12">September 12<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 8 Letter from the Venb<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">l</hi> <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Archdeacon Wright</persName> to
<persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName> Esq<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">e</hi>, Acting Col Secr<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">y</hi>.
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-11">September 11<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of 5"/>
N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 9 Chief Commissioner of Lands and Works to the Members of
the Prize Essay Board stating that "the Col. Secretary says he is not
authorized to place the Original Essay in the hands of the Judges."
<lb/>
<date when="1863-09-14">September 14<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>.
<milestone unit="section" rend=".of "/><lb/><lb/>
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<head>No. 1 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Moody</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>, <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>,
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-04">4<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> September 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Colonel Moody</persName> R.E.
Chief Comm<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> of Lands and Works
&amp;c &amp;c &amp;c</name>
<lb/><lb/>
Sir
</opener>
<p>
Printed copies purporting to be of an Essay on the
"Resources &amp;c of <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName> by the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown</persName>,"
and for which Essay we—as authorized Judges—awarded a prize of
fifty pounds, having been put into our hands this afternoon, we hereby
protest against and interdict the issue<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">of</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00466v.jpg"/> of such printed pamphlet as
containing matter not in the original Essay, but matter entirely at
variance with what was in the original, and which will convey grossly
false impressions upon the state of the Colony as to its
political and social aspects.
</p>
<closer>
We have the honor to be Sir
<lb/>
Your most obedient Servants
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">H. Holbrook</persName>
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:cormack">W.E. Cormack</persName>
<lb/>
<lb/><lb/>
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<head>No. 2 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Archdeacon Wright</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>, <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>,
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-05">September 5<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To the Venerable <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">The Archdeacon Wright</persName></name>
<lb/><lb/>
Reverend Sir
</opener>
<p>
The Essay on <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName> by the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown</persName>,
of which yourself and the subscribers were appointed
judges, has appeared in a printed form,<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">from</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00467v.jpg"/> from which the following
extract is made, from "Chapter VIII, on the political and Social
aspects"
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The manner in which the Government is carried
on, and the laws administered gives general Satisfaction. So
long as the Colony progresses, and its new necessities are
met by new enactments, the Colonists (with the exception of
an uninfluential clique at <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>) are Satisfied,
they have not the wish, as in the present circumstances they
would not have the time, to legislate for themselves.<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">Yet</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00468r.jpg"/> Yet,
although <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName> has flourished under the present
Governor, it is evident that her interests can never receive
that exclusive attention which is essential to her rapid
development, so long as his Excellency has also charge of
the neighbouring colony of <placeName ref="plc:vancouver_island">Vancouvers Island</placeName>, and resides there.
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<p>
As no such paragraph appeared in the original manuscript,
we are at a loss to account for it in the<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">printed</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00468v.jpg"/> printed essay, and
are therefore very desirous to have your opinion on the subject.
</p>
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We have the honor to remain Reverend Sir
<lb/>
Yours very faithfully
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">H. Holbrook</persName>
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:cormack">W.E. Cormack</persName>
<lb/>
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<head>No. 3 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>,
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-07">September 7<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">Mess<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">rs</hi> <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> &amp; <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></name>
<lb/><lb/>
Gent<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">n</hi>,
</opener>
<p>
I beg to acknowledge your letter dated <date when="1863-09-05">September 5<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi></date>.
The Essay by the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown</persName> to which we awarded a
prize of £50 was returned by me to the Chief Comm<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi><fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">of</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00469v.jpg"/> of
Lands and Works and passed on by him to His Excellency the
Governor. <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> Brown</persName> was informed by letter from <placeName ref="plc:victoria">Victoria</placeName>
that previous to publication the matter must be condensed and
fitted for the press.
</p>
<p>
I observe that the Essay has been greatly changed, some
passages very interesting to the Colonists have disappeared,
and others far from acceptable to them, have been introduced.
Among the latter I place that to which you have drawn my
special attention. The<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">addition</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00470r.jpg"/> addition of an uncalled for attack
upon some of the inhabitants of this City is very much to be
regretted, and by no means just towards those who were requested
to act as judges of the Essays.
</p>
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I am Gent<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">n</hi>
<lb/>
Yours faithfully
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:wright_hp">H.P. Wright</persName>
<lb/>
Archdeacon of Columbia
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<head>No. 4 <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> to <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Moody</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-07">September 7<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Colonel Moody</persName> R.E.
Chief Comm<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> of Lands and Works
&amp;c &amp;c &amp;c</name>
<lb/><lb/>
Sir,
</opener><fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">As</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00471v.jpg"/>
<p>
As we find that certain matter has been introduced into
the printed form of the Prize Essay on <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName> by
the <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">Rev<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">d</hi> R.C.L. Brown</persName>, which did not appear in the original
manuscript, we beg respectfully you will place the manuscript
at our disposal for a day or two, in order that we may have
an opportunity of assuring ourselves of the nature and extent
of such changes.
</p>
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We have the honor to be Sir
<lb/>
Your most obedient Servants
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">H. Holbrook</persName>
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:cormack">W.E. Cormack</persName>
<lb/>
<lb/><lb/>
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<head>No. 5 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-08">September 8<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To <persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName> Esq<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">e</hi>
&amp;c &amp;c &amp;c</name>
<lb/><lb/>
Dear Sir
</opener>
<p>
The inhabitants of <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> are very indignant
about the alterations made in the Essay to which a prize of
£50 was awarded. One passage which speaks<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">of</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00472v.jpg"/> of "an uninfluential
clique" (page 52) is an addition condemned by all. Mess<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">rs</hi>
<persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> have asked me to sign a letter requesting
that the manuscript may be returned to the Judges for
examination. I have not consented to their request simply
because I do not think that a formal address to the Governor
upon the matter is necessary. Further, my belief is that much
of the original Essay has been destroyed, as <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> Brown</persName>
informed me that he had rewritten much of it. I write<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">to</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00473r.jpg"/> to
say that I quite feel with my fellow judges the impropriety
of the article upon <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> and of the numerous
unnecessary changes that have been made. Perhaps it will
be well to allow the manuscript to be seen again by the
Judges—especially as <persName ref="prs:brown_rl">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> Brown</persName> has said that he received
instructions from <placeName ref="plc:victoria">Victoria</placeName> to condense the matter previous
to printing.
</p>
<closer>
Yours truly
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:wright_hp">H.P. Wright</persName>
<lb/>
<lb/><lb/>
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<head>No. 6 <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Moody</persName> to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
Lands and Works Department
</addrLine>
<addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-09">9<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> Sept<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">Mess<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">rs</hi> <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> &amp; <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></name>
<lb/><lb/>
Gentlemen,
</opener>
<p>
I have the honor to acknowledge the receipt of your two
letters dated <date when="1863-09-04">4<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> Sept<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi></date> and <date when="1863-09-08">8<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> Sept<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi></date> and I have
referred both through the Colonial Secretary to<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">His</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00474v.jpg"/> His Excellency
the Governor.
</p>
<p>
In the matter of the issue of the Prize Essay, this
Department has solely acted as
<hi style="text-decoration: underline;">Printer</hi>; and it is not in my power to cause the Manuscript,
as received by me to print, to be laid before you without authority.
</p>
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I have the honor to be Gentlemen
<lb/>
Your most obedient Servant
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:moody_rc">R.C. Moody</persName>
<lb/>
Colonel, R.E. &amp;c
<lb/>
Chief Commissioner
<lb/>
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<head>No. 7 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> and <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>, <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-12">September 12<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">Mess<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">rs</hi> <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName> &amp; <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName></name>
<lb/>
Gentlemen,
</opener>
<p>
I declined joining in any formal application for a return
of the Essay M.S. to the Board of Judges, but I wrote to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi>
Young</persName> about the alterations &amp;c. <persName ref="prs:young_wag">M<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">r</hi> Young</persName> holds that when<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">the</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00475v.jpg"/> the Judges had given their decision "their functions ceased." As
the view he takes is one which would enable any amount of good
or bad composition, of truth or falsehood to be published as
approved by the Board, I felt it my duty to show cause why I
deemed him in error. I consider it due to you that my letter
should be before you, and I therefore enclose a copy of it.
Having done all that I thought necessary touching the alterations
in<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">the</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00476r.jpg"/> the Essay, I must decline saying any thing further upon the matter.
</p>
<closer>
Yours obediently and faithfully
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:wright_hp">H.P. Wright</persName>
<lb/>
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<head>No. 8 <persName ref="prs:wright_hp">Wright</persName> to <persName ref="prs:young_wag">Young</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
<placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> <placeName ref="plc:british_columbia">British Columbia</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-11">September 11<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">To <persName ref="prs:young_wag">W.A.G. Young</persName> Esq<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">e</hi>
Acting Colonial Secretary
&amp;c &amp;c &amp;c</name>
<lb/><lb/>
Dear Sir
</opener>
<p>
I have to acknowledge your letter of the <date when="1863-09-10">10<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> September</date>.
I quite agree with you that the Judges were not invited by
His Excellency the Governor<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">to</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00477v.jpg"/> to act as Censors, but I presume
it was intended they should act as honest men. They gave their
judgement in favor of an Essay which they deemed able and
useful; but to publish as that Essay a pamphlet much of which
had never been seen by them, they consider unfair to themselves,
the public at large, and to those who competed for the Prize.
By all means let there be freedom of opinion, but with it let
there be strict integrity.
</p>
<p>
I travelled from one end of this Colony to the other, and<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">from</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00478r.jpg"/>
from <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName> to <placeName ref="plc:alexandria">Alexandria</placeName>: the common cry was for
a resident Governor, Separation of the two Colonies, and some
form of Self Government, and with that cry I may say every
official in this City sympathizes; but if the writer of the
Prize Essay thinks proper to say that all are contented with
the present state of things, he has a perfect right to his
opinion, but he has no right—after the Judges have given their
decision, largely to alter and to qualify what was originally
written, and to introduce an uninvited and bitter attack upon
a portion of the inhabitants of the Colony.<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">Your</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00478v.jpg"/> Your letter
implies that you know certain persons who, after the Prize
had been awarded, tried to tamper with the author. I am very
sorry to hear it.
</p>
<closer>
I am Yours truly
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:wright_hp">H.P. Wright</persName>
<lb/>
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<head>No. 9 <persName ref="prs:moody_rc">Moody</persName> to <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></head>
<opener><address><addrLine>
Land and Works Department, <placeName ref="plc:new_westminster">New Westminster</placeName>
</addrLine>
</address>
<date when="1863-09-14">14<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> September 1863</date>
<name type="addressee">Mess<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">rs</hi> <persName ref="prs:holbrook">Holbrook</persName> and <persName ref="prs:cormack">Cormack</persName></name>,
<lb/>
Gentlemen,
</opener>
<p>
With reference to my letter to you N<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">o</hi> 217 of the <date when="1863-09-09">9<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi>
Instant</date>, I have now the honor to acquaint you of my having<fw type="catchword" style="text-align: right;">been</fw><pb facs="co_60_17/co_60_17_00479v.jpg"/>
been instructed by the Colonial Secretary that I am not
authorized to accede to the requests made by you in your
letters of the <date when="1863-09-04">4<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi></date> &amp; <date when="1863-09-07">7<hi style="vertical-align: super; font-size: 80%;">th</hi> Instant</date>.
</p>
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I have the honor to be Sirs
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Your most obedient Servant,
<lb/>
<persName ref="prs:moody_rc">R.C. Moody</persName>
<lb/>
Colonel R.E. and
<lb/>
Chief Commissioner
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